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Alguien me podría corregir este review de un writing de inglés para la EOI para saber si ir a revisión o no, dependiendo de los fallos... tengo algunos fallos que me he dado cuenta, los cuáles lo expreso entre paréntesis, pero el resto no lo visualizo bien para que no haya aprobado. Agradecería si alguien me pudiese echar una mano. Muchas gracias.

Brighton is a marvellous restaurant known in Cadiz. It was built in 2000 and based on American food.The restaurant depicts a great variety of American food, although in recent years they have been included Spanish food and different types of dishes.

As I have written above, the restaurant takes place in Cadiz near to the Stadium which is called "Carranza". Many people tend to go on Sundays when they go to see a football match. For this reason, attendance in this type of restaurant tends to be young people due to its hamburgers which attract teenagers, even sausages can be included in your burger.

This restaurant is beautifully organised and decorated and the waiters are excellent and well-developed. The waiters are good professionals according to their client´s needs. It is decorated with an American style which you could observe on its walls. Their (Its) walls contains million (millions) of American singers and actors. It is similar to a known restaurant is called "Foster Hollywood". This place has a calm atmosphere where you can relax with your friends while you enjoy (of) a delicious food.

The restaurant has as main dish hamburgers (has hamburgers as main dish), but you could find a variety menu. This restaurant provides a space for interactions with other people since many people who run the place are English students. For this reason, it is a good place where you could improve your English Spoken.(Spoken English)
This fascinating restaurant is guaranted (guaranteed) to keep the clients absorved (absorbed) with its delicious food and waiters from beginning to end. The price is accessible to the general public. Don´t miss your chance to visit this amazing restaurant. If you like a good American food, you will enjoy visiting "Brigton".